Magnificent
Sombra here.
Great job man, this is actually the first time I've watched any of your flash and now I can say that I have watched the flash of Flounderman and I am impressed. Kudos on doing the voicing for it too, it takes a little bit of extra effort but sometimes speakonia just doesn't fit into the piece right.
That handgun was really well drawn by the way.
Probably the best thing that ever came out of NG
Keep up the good work.
I'm just glad that I wasn't high when I saw that.
Not bad for a first.
Sombra here from the crew. You need to work on perspective a little more to make the road and buildings behind your avatar look a little more realistic. I liked it, and it was pretty decent for your first flash.
And the cycle continues...
And the cycle continues...
I've done some stuff on the guitar in the past, and I can identify with how emotion can fuel the work of the artist. I wonder, was that old man that tipped The Composer a musician in his own day?
I can understand why this has gotten the top spot of Newgrounds, and I agree with the voting pattern for this movie. This must have required an enormous amount of work to do: it isn't like a movie where you just turn the camera and go, you actually have to hand draw everything in the flash video. I particularly noticed the detail in the auditorium scene, which was a great inspiration for beginning flash artists like myself. It's almost hard to beleive that the crudely drawn pictures I've made and this masterpiece were actually done with the same program.
I don't really know that flash can get any better than this, so all the advice I can give to you is to keep on making it the way you have been. The only issue I have with the submission is just a small problem with the parent's voices in the beginning; they sounded a little too scripted and not quite heartfelt. Other than that, this was a superb piece of work.
Hmmm
It's funny, but I think people write more constructive reviews if they know that they are going to get a response. Two things you could have done better: take more time on your drawings, and tell us a little bit about what's going on.
I have drawn and animated a little in flash, so I'm not just another dumbfuck reviewer who thinks they are hot shit. You need to take more time on your drawings. That thing in the dude's hand didn't look like a machete at all, it looked like an ice pick or something like that. Machetes do not have points on the end of them because they are not made for stabbing, they are made for hacking. Also, you need to work on perspective because everything looked terrible in two dimensions, though 2D can be done well.
The flash doesn't necessarily have to have a grandiose plot to work well, but it will bring your viewers in and get their attention a little more if you take some time to give us some backstory, even if it's just something as simple as "The dude is in the mood for a killing spree!" in bloody letters that drips across the screen.
Great work
I agree, it was a little too mopy for regular clock flash, but you did a good job of making up for it with lots of profanity, which is definitely a staple of the crew.
I think you were probably the most deserving of all CFs that were clockified this month, and what suprised me along with so many other people is that you were also the newest. I'm glad that you have found a mod that will stick up for you, it's a great thing to have friends in the right places.
I can't give you any suggestions on your flash work since you've already surpassed me in ability, but hey, that's why you're a clock and I didn't make it. I can say that this is well-done for somone who is so new to the crew, though.
mmm and which clock are you? Sombra?
well still thanks a lot for your words :)
Not bad at all
I thought the animation was very crisp, the text box and text was pretty cool looking, and the flash was funny overall. Great work, rupee. Fiven.
If you thought this was great, check some of my later works. :)
Proof
Proof that the crew is united under the banner of kick-ass flash.
Sombra
I kept thinking that a screamer was going to pop up. Also, happy birthday mang.
Question
Of course it goes without saying that something like this deserves a five out of five.
My question is, when he becomes a monster, is this metaphorical or real within the world of your flash?
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