pyromancer102's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Revelation_]

Great work

I agree, it was a little too mopy for regular clock flash, but you did a good job of making up for it with lots of profanity, which is definitely a staple of the crew.

I think you were probably the most deserving of all CFs that were clockified this month, and what suprised me along with so many other people is that you were also the newest. I'm glad that you have found a mod that will stick up for you, it's a great thing to have friends in the right places.

I can't give you any suggestions on your flash work since you've already surpassed me in ability, but hey, that's why you're a clock and I didn't make it. I can say that this is well-done for somone who is so new to the crew, though.

SsjToasterClock responds:

mmm and which clock are you? Sombra?

well still thanks a lot for your words :)

[SBC plots for Frontpage!]

Not bad at all

I thought the animation was very crisp, the text box and text was pretty cool looking, and the flash was funny overall. Great work, rupee. Fiven.

RupeeClock responds:

If you thought this was great, check some of my later works. :)

[Magic Crack Rocks]

Original

This was a very original flash. I don't think the concept of "magic crack" has really been put onto paper, or in your case, flash. While I certainly like other qualities of your flash, it gets the most on creativity in my book. As a fellow artist, I understand how hard it is to be fresh nowadays.

As for the animation, it is done well. The jumping and the backward running were good animations, but you might want to work on your string-of-events animations. When Jazz stabbed the guy he just kind of fell; no slipping from the catwalk or pushing or anything else logical.

The voiceovers were well done and made me feel like these were real people talking. My only problem was the whole "theres no getting out of this deal" part. It was kind of cheesy.

With the bios, many people are too stupid and lazy to read that much and will resultingly miss much of your backstory which has alot of potential. If you put this to flash, it could perhaps be enought to make a whole series. You might want to go into detail with what power, sould, skill and stealth mean as well.

You have alot of potential, as you have your own unique style wich is rare when flash has been done for so long. If you work on your fight scenes and show us the actual fights insead of just the afterefects, you could certainly be one of the best aritsts on Newgrounds.

JazLyte responds:

Thanx cuz,and I know what you mean about the bios, considering I've put myself into a stalemate with them. I was going to make some minor changes to the story but I've deleted the .FLAs for ep.1 and ep.2 and can't take out the old profile/story etc. I just put them there originally so that people would have somethin' to do while the movie loaded. Regardless, your advice helps out alot, thanks man ^_^ And I will work on the fights

[DevilSlayer]

I'd give you a 4.5 if it went like that

This was a high quality animation. Your characters were very interesting and it seemed like they actually had lives and stories to tell. Your graphics, in my opinion, were the best part of the flash. The drawings were very nice and the anime theme went well with the story.

The only thing I didn't like about the fight scenes was how it didn't really show the actual contact or blocks- it seems like you were focusing on how powerful they were and not how they used it.

The sounds were a little off as well, like when one of your characters threw the sword at the female demon's face, it made a male grunt sound. You might want to expand your repitoir of sounds for future animations and coordinate them a little more.

Otherwise, this was a really nice animation.

JazLyte responds:

Yeah, I'm guilty on the fights. I was still really new to flash when I made it, and I still am. But I'm workin' hard on actually putting "action" into the action scenes. You had a good way of putting it. "it seems like you were focusing on how powerful they were and not how they used it." That really helps me to see where I went wrong at. Thanks for leaving a constructive review, it's refreshing, man. :)

[Billy's Rock Rampage]

Lol

That was pretty interesting. Is it supposed to look like he has a penis flipping out when you shift his image back and forth qucikly?

Too bad about that power rangers song you did a while back, that was fuckin hilarious.

DAIRYDOG responds:

That penis flapping effect was not intended.

But thank you for noticing it anyways.

[Cool Things 082]

Nice job boys.

this is not generic or unoriginal in the least...

psychojester responds:

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[Rest in Peace Piconjo]

short

this was short, but sweet. good job, mr chocobo, i will always be a good fan of your work. and to piconjo---

we barely knew ye...

barley knew ye...

DAIRYDOG responds:

Piconjo loves you.

[The Abandoned Kitten]

bored...

i thought i was gonna see anohter clown dick dude... thank god. this was pretty borring but i commend you on trying to play the genral public by putting something cute and cuddly in it. <3 !

DAIRYDOG responds:

Sorry, next time I'll give you a clown dick dude.